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I choose to hide myself
around me none shall pass
this little game of hide-and-seek
will be soon encompassed

Within my frozen, dormant heart
a spirit there still lies
it lies await in shadow
far from prying eyes

To be me is a burden
not for those of little care
to hide these feelings
many would despair

To be me is not easy
to be here is not fun
my lifes a living torment
a game not to be won
©2004-2009 ~Xxbloody-kissesxX
:iconxxbloody-kissesxx:

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I wrote this for my English Honors class last year. We had to write about ourselves. It made my teacher think I am disturbed...

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:icondudemanwow:
wow this is awsome.....very kool :glomp: lol

--
I pace, alone
In a place for the dead
Overcome by woe
And here, I've grown
So fond of dread
That I swear it's heaven

-dani filth (cradle of filth)
:iconxxbloody-kissesxx:
thanks alot! yay! :D

--
Money can't buy you happiness but poverty can't buy you anything.
:icontatsu-kami:
Heh, I can't imagine why... kidding, I'm sure your teacher understood, this is a common feeling, I think... Otherwise I'm disturbed as well. Meh, If this is truely how you see yourself, look at the emotion you put into this, I think that may have thawed out your heart, just a tad. I love your poetry! It's brilliant, I think I may have to watch you.

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(' ',)

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